POOR MISS FINCH by Wilkie Collins

POOR MISS FINCH by Wilkie Collins

23 May 2011

Mr. Gilfil's Love-Story (chaps.3-6) from SCENES (April 1857)

Dear Serial Readers,

First, I just added an article link to the list of blogs and articles (see right column, scroll down past several novel covers)about designing a Kindle for Dickens.

On this story as a serial: I continue to be intrigued by Eliot's reverse-narrative with Mr. G's story. In this second installment, the narration goes back several decades to the summer of 1788 in Italy to tell the backstory of Caterina Sarti and how she came to be a ward of Sir and Lady C at Cheverel Manor. I found echoes of various Victorian narratives before and after this one, including Aurora Leigh (transplanted too from Tuscany to England). The narrative structure that sets a scene in the opening two chapters and then jumps back to provide a richer narrative context for that initial moment is a form Eliot uses in her final novel DANIEL DERONDA. I wonder how effective this shape is for the serial? Perhaps one could read this story and not even need the first two chapters (ie first installment) to follow it?

That this story stands on its own apart from the first "Amos Barton" SCENE is clear, and yet Eliot does intertwine the stories, again going backward. I'm curious to see how the last story, "Janet's Repentance," will play into the serial and the backward narrative structure. But first, the penultimate segment of this story for next week--chapters 7-13.

Serially yours,
Susan

1 comment:

readerann said...

An interesting question, how this narrative structure works for serial publishing. I enjoyed backtracking to get all of Caterina's story. Then I got quite caught up in her suffering over the Captain and in Eliot's asides: "for a passionate woman's love is always overshadowed by fear" and "One of the tortures of jealousy is, that it can never turn away its eyes from the thing that pains it."